Self Teaching Unit:
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This brief instructional unit will examine strengths and weaknesses in various kinds of sentences. In addition, it will show you some techniques for creating sentences that are
Using a variety of sentence combining methods will enhance your writing as well by providing a mixture of sentence types and thereby keep your reader from becoming bored.
In general, avoid the following kinds of sentences:
1. Primer style sentences - ERROR
2. Loose, stringy, run-on, over-coordinated sentences - ERROR
3. Excessively subordinated, tangled sentences - ERROR
In addition, use one or more of the following methods to combine sentences into clear, economical, tight units of thought:
Method #1: Reduce one sentence into a present participial phrase (-ing phrase).
The emphasis in each example above is different: Example 1 emphasizes creeping through the grass while example 2 emphasizes watching the mouse.
Method #2: Reduce one sentence into a past participial phrase (-ed or -en verbal phrase).
Method #3: Reduce one sentence into an adverbial clause (beginning with when, if etc.).
Note that each combination in the above example emphasizes a different part of the sentence. The first sentence combination emphasizes that Jones feels good; the second emphasizes that she works out.
comma use with adverbial clauses
Method #4: Reduce one sentence into an adjectival clause (beginning with that, which, who, etc.).
Note that each combination in the above example emphasizes a different part of the sentence. The first sentence emphasizes how long Bill Bristol was at the supermarket; the second emphasizes what time he got there.
comma use with adjectival clauses
Method #5: Reduce one sentence into an appositive (re-namer).
Note that each combination in the above example emphasizes a different part of the sentence. The first sentence emphasizes that Ms. Browne is an applicant; the second emphasizes that she is a well known financial advisor.
Method #6: Create a series.
Here are some examples that use several methods at a time to combine sentences. Note carefully how all information has been included in the final sentence in a concise, clear, graceful manner.
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